Fluffy- Robyn

I got a really bad migraine this morning and I wasn’t productive at all. I took some medicine and went back to sleep. I had a dream of my dog Fluffy. He is a really cute bulldog that is a very playful dog and doesn’t bite even if you were to threaten him. Then I woke up, still having the migraine and when I got out of my bed, I saw the slime dripped through my shirt. Bu It was actually Fluffy’s saliva. EWW. But for some reason my headache was gone. Who knew that dogs could have healing powers!

 

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  1. We really like your creative idea of making the dog’s saliva have healing powers. Sentence punctuation is accurate.
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